CC4: Jonny's Comic
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Fantastic work and work ethic Jonny! Very proud of you man!
Some crits, and I'm sure they will come at you during the crit/judging sessions but those tone patterns you used could probably be integrated a little better for a more consistent look. The combination of dot patterns and the other type of hatching I find a little too disjoint. Especially in the last major panel, I find that hatching more distracting to the image, than anything, as much as I like the texture.
Anyway good job buddy!

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CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-12-2016, 07:08 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by John - 06-12-2016, 07:48 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-12-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Piotr Jasielski - 06-12-2016, 10:55 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-12-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Amit Dutta - 06-12-2016, 12:59 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by neopatogen - 06-12-2016, 03:35 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by RottenPocket - 06-12-2016, 05:06 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 05:17 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by neopatogen - 06-13-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 11:21 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 12:31 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-14-2016, 01:47 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 02:27 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Amit Dutta - 06-14-2016, 03:21 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-14-2016, 11:44 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-16-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-17-2016, 10:02 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-20-2016, 03:07 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Amit Dutta - 06-20-2016, 03:59 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-21-2016, 12:15 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by smrr - 06-21-2016, 07:25 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by John - 06-21-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by CTrow - 06-22-2016, 07:14 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Eyliana - 06-22-2016, 10:54 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-23-2016, 02:23 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by CTrow - 06-24-2016, 04:23 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Eyliana - 06-24-2016, 04:39 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-24-2016, 04:52 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-26-2016, 04:18 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Arapersonica - 06-26-2016, 07:02 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Hobitt - 06-26-2016, 10:49 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-26-2016, 12:50 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by smrr - 06-26-2016, 01:54 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-26-2016, 02:16 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by KurtJeremy - 06-27-2016, 05:16 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-27-2016, 06:13 AM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Zipfelzeus - 06-27-2016, 12:29 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-27-2016, 01:57 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by Amit Dutta - 06-27-2016, 02:02 PM
RE: CC4: Jonny's Comic - by JyonnyNovice - 06-27-2016, 02:12 PM

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