07-02-2016, 08:19 AM
Hi and welcome!
My main issue with your work would be that it looks blured and some areas have too much value contrast.
As for the last one, it shows you really need to work on perspective as it is completely broken and it looks like she is sitting on a wall.
Good luck!
My main issue with your work would be that it looks blured and some areas have too much value contrast.
As for the last one, it shows you really need to work on perspective as it is completely broken and it looks like she is sitting on a wall.
Good luck!
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