Stuck and looking for critiques

[Ravel]

I will move on to practising proper proportions then. Never practised in a way that it was not also stylized. Have to brace myself!

Oh wow. The posts are great. Thank you. Things make a bit more sense when looking at them than the tutorial things I have been using. I do not mind learning to move away from tutorials, as I could never make out anything out of them.

I will start practising and post my progress in a sketchbook.

Thank you again!