07-03-2016, 06:14 PM
(07-03-2016, 06:02 PM)crackedskull Wrote: Amit - I am confused by this thought exercise. I did some magic and am happy with the result.
You and me both buddy. It's more like a monty python sketch perhaps :P
Looking better now man. I'll definitely give it a good read. Thanks!
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yeah....definitely would use less white in the body text..you cracker. Inject into the text some sweet neutral chocolate love.
If you sort ^ above I find it can be useful to bold the first sentence or summary phrase of every section that sums up the section to get it to pop. That way people can get a quick hit of what it's about and read further for detail. It actually follows good rules for legibility of effective writing. State your summary point up front, everything else in the paragraph adds detail and explanation to back up the point. A lot of the text already follows that pattern.