07-30-2012, 06:48 AM
Cool characters! They've got a lot of personality due to the expressions and the poses. Just a thought on the first one: The light seems to be coming from two directions, which kills the contrast a bit (wounds..the contrast i guess xD) maybe darken some parts or change up the light a bit? Like a direct light and a rim light on the side that's darker. Just my thoughts, I'm in no way an expert on the subject.