A Egg Yoks Journey into becoming a better Artist.

[John]

Im not sure I feel like the linearts just a tad bit messy but, still tell me what you guys think?

I'll be straight forward with you on this. I think it's awesome to doodle. However, on a "is this good?" standpoint, being keen on proportions, and better foreshortening might help. Also, the figure does not look stable. It looks like it's tipping over to the side. Line art is the least of your problems.

But, then again, props for drawing just for the sake of it. In a forum where every one striving to get better at something, this is a great reminder that people should never lose that notion of drawing in itself is rewarding as opposed to rewarding because I'm getting something out of it.

Again, basically, anatomy, form and perspective!