08-03-2016, 10:57 PM
Hi Olooriel, see a lot of potential and dedication in this SB. Hope you don´t mind that i took the liberty to drawover one image with potential to illustrate my point. The issue on the image is not structure but what could accentuate the illustration and the charecter overall.
Just my two cents. Hope it helps!
Just my two cents. Hope it helps!