08-04-2016, 01:46 AM
(08-04-2016, 01:13 AM)ZombieChinchilla Wrote: Nice start! Your panda lady is pretty cool but there are a few anatomy things that could be tweaked. For example, her feet and (her) left arm are a little small. Also her head seems to be a little flat at the top and stretched out too much, move her bun more to the left of the image and add more volume to her hair at the top. And finally the panda itself seems bent in an uncomfortable position, I'd do more research on pandas and change the position of either its butt or its head so it isn't as twisted. Keep it up, though, and keep working!
So I read your comment and yes you are 100% correct with what you said.
I quickly went back to photoshop and (kinda sloppy) changed stuff up real quick.
The pose for the panda really doesn't work, poor pandas spine is twisted (probably stuffed here since you know.)
So the quickest thing to do as a quick fix is more or less to have the panda Not twist around the lady.
But once again, super quick sloppy fix, will work on it more properly (I've already given the finish piece to the person I made it for so now I have all the time in the world to mess with this image and fix the mistakes I've made.)
Thank you so much for your critiq!
I'll try to re-make the sloppy correction later today, have to go now because football practice.