08-04-2016, 10:32 AM
Heyo, welcome to daggers!
I feel your original composition works good, needs adjustment to make panda not look so distorted but pose is effective, makes woman look like protector of bear, or strong confident partners.Good narrative!
I made a paintover, hope it is helpful, you can see even without bear hindquarters sticking out, on left of the composition, triangle is maintained by drapery of character.
Keep truckin!
I feel your original composition works good, needs adjustment to make panda not look so distorted but pose is effective, makes woman look like protector of bear, or strong confident partners.Good narrative!
I made a paintover, hope it is helpful, you can see even without bear hindquarters sticking out, on left of the composition, triangle is maintained by drapery of character.
Keep truckin!