Rotten's Pocket

[John]

First off, Love the theme. Love the rendering. Now, let's get that out of the way for this:


Main thing:
- Changed the thickness of the leg away from the viewer. It seems a bit thick comparing it to the leg on the foreground. With that, I took the liberty to change the pelvic bone a bit. Made the lower part of the pelvic bone jut out so the viewer can see how the pelvis and leg connect.


Optional:
- Titled her/its head back. It gives it/her that distinguished look of confidence that says: "Look what I can do with just one hand."
- Her other hand placed on the waist, just because! Idk!

Not sure what the grand scheme for this piece is.. that's why I'm guessing my critique might not be useful to you. I'm one of those guys who would sacrifice proportion, perspective and "rightness" for the sake of composition, so I get it if this means absolutely nothing to you! Haha! (cue in nervous laugh)

Love where it's headed as it is. Stoked to see it finished. Make a killing out of this RP!