08-10-2016, 04:42 AM
... i don't liek et.
Haha, sorry, THANKYOU for the draw over, I've never had someone take the time to do that, but in this case I'd have to disagree on a couple of points.
1. THE FACE. The new direction points the face away from the focus of the -spell-, which leads the eye to empty space and loses the connection to the rest of the image.
2.THE LEGS. That thigh should be a bit thinner - easy fix - but not to the extent of your drawover. Your version looks too thin, and more importantly too human. When the legs appear more saurian I as a viewer of the work of others, mark appropriate anatomy as one of the most important factors. In all secondary/ankle jointed animals - horses, dogs, bipedal dinosaurs etc. The flank is broad and flat.
Just a peeve of mine when someone makes a humanoid critter and it's literally a human being with a few extra features like horns and a tail. Make that shit lizard-like. This one's hands are a poor example but on my first page i think there's a shot of an iguana lady - claws yes, but lizards have long fingers and the ring finger would be the longest.
2. THAT HAND THO. That pose is so not this character. It's like the 'i want to see the manager' or 'what do you MEAN I'm grounded?' Pose.
I must remember to use direction/axis lines as a guide. I mostly work it out as I go but your lines look good.
Thanks again John, i will fix the bits that don't work.
Haha, sorry, THANKYOU for the draw over, I've never had someone take the time to do that, but in this case I'd have to disagree on a couple of points.
1. THE FACE. The new direction points the face away from the focus of the -spell-, which leads the eye to empty space and loses the connection to the rest of the image.
2.THE LEGS. That thigh should be a bit thinner - easy fix - but not to the extent of your drawover. Your version looks too thin, and more importantly too human. When the legs appear more saurian I as a viewer of the work of others, mark appropriate anatomy as one of the most important factors. In all secondary/ankle jointed animals - horses, dogs, bipedal dinosaurs etc. The flank is broad and flat.
Just a peeve of mine when someone makes a humanoid critter and it's literally a human being with a few extra features like horns and a tail. Make that shit lizard-like. This one's hands are a poor example but on my first page i think there's a shot of an iguana lady - claws yes, but lizards have long fingers and the ring finger would be the longest.
2. THAT HAND THO. That pose is so not this character. It's like the 'i want to see the manager' or 'what do you MEAN I'm grounded?' Pose.
I must remember to use direction/axis lines as a guide. I mostly work it out as I go but your lines look good.
Thanks again John, i will fix the bits that don't work.