Star Trek fan art/bookcover

[Simonarpalmer]

Thank you very much Sam! Very helpful, I started over with a new sketch based on your critique, that I believe is much better. I tried to clearly seperate all planes with contrast and color, and create two focal points, with the large female face being the dominant one, and the dark foreground woman's face being secondary, and I will make sure to let areas outside of them be less sharp and defined when I render the painting.