CC September

[genosgrande]

Nice work so far Genosgrande :).

Just a couple of things I noticed:

1. The main guy looks a bit off balance - try standing in a pose with your knee up like that and see what adjustments you can make to his pose.  I think you might need to move his standing leg so that it is straight and aligning directly below his head.

2. The goblin guy looks quite beefy so maybe try beefing up his arm (make it longer and more muscular).

Hope that helps - keep it going!

Agh, I didn't read your post today before painting. I think I corrected some of the things a little. I did adjust the leg today but I don't know if it was enough. I'm not sure why I didn't notice the arm proportion to torso. I want him pretty stocky. I'll try adding some mass to his arms tomorrow too!