In need for critiq

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Heya! And welcome to the board.


Really cool piece! Is this from a book?


Okay hear me out... I'm not an expert on lighting. I'm just trying to help. If any other Daggers have suggestions please
feel free to share.

So you want the girl in the center of attention right?

My suggestion would be to darken the area around the outer corners of the piece and lighten up the center where the girl stands.
Also slightly more saturated colors on the girl and the dragon creature to separate them even more form the background cast.
I did a quick paintover. I hope this helps.




Sorry if this is not the mood you're going for... I tried haha D:

My lighting might be a bit to strong... but I hope you get the idea.

Thank you for ripley. 
No it's for my series of painting that i'm planning to do.
Yeah, i thought about it as well but for some reason didn't do it, i will try this one out.