Ramon Rads

[Fedodika]

You've got some promising stuff in here, I'd reccomend trying to pretty up a few drawings like the one you did on the right here

http://i63.tinypic.com/eun5t5.jpg

Using line weight or values, then try to invent something like a character with hair and a costume maybe... Also start investing in face construction, the stalin portrait his nose is very skewed it looks like someone broke it hehe; Your figures are very good though, just watch the proportions in the midsection, they are too short like in these

http://i68.tinypic.com/2dc6fr5.jpg

With this girl, it's not ALWAYS like this, but in general it gives a more attractive measurement. THe distance from the pectoralis connecting to the deltoid, down the bottom of the rib cage is the same distance from the bottom of the rib cage to the crotch. Almost like a half/half thing

http://gals.kindgirls.com/d/tanya_h_4454...4544_3.jpg

But i've seen even pros make this mistake (and constantly), and it really can cost them a good image despite the fabulous rendering around it