Them sketchies
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You definitely know what you're doing, so I just urge you to do more of it, much more! Leyendecker studies are top notch, it's great you're studying both realism and cartoon(ism), which is apparently paying off to you. Comparing b&w and color thingy of the adorable campfire, how did you color your picture? I can see a lot fixed and rendered anew. Also, just to pretend I can help you (xD), the biggest guy's right (like, his right) leg, if it's a leg' is undefined and pretty messy, so you can render there a little bit, and between the most left and most right characters and most center ones you can add a little bit of fog or some evaporating snow just to create distance and the illusion of depth, because in opposition to left side characters, the right ones are sort of merging together.

But here's something about internet critique that I think a lot of us sometimes forget - critique is easy to get, but to get good critique is hard, which is the other way of saying - don't believe too much in anything I (or others) say about your work, unless they're really pro - but even then, have faith in yourself. :D

Gosh, that was a rant. My first one here, I think. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!

Why do you complain of your fate when you could so easily change it?
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Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-08-2016, 04:21 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-09-2016, 05:09 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Piotr Jasielski - 10-09-2016, 07:53 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Artloader - 10-09-2016, 08:15 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by roguesleipnir - 10-09-2016, 09:25 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by dawckward - 10-09-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by nymph0 - 10-09-2016, 11:25 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-10-2016, 09:58 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by nymph0 - 10-10-2016, 10:00 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-11-2016, 03:19 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by devares - 10-11-2016, 05:31 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 10-11-2016, 10:31 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by neopatogen - 10-12-2016, 08:42 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Elderscroller - 10-13-2016, 07:07 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-15-2016, 04:58 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Nick C. - 10-15-2016, 06:22 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Lodratio - 10-15-2016, 09:49 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Piotr Jasielski - 10-16-2016, 10:18 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-17-2016, 10:51 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by devares - 10-17-2016, 11:09 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-18-2016, 11:53 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Einver - 10-20-2016, 01:24 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-29-2016, 05:23 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 10-30-2016, 05:51 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by neopatogen - 10-30-2016, 07:15 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 11-01-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 11-01-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 12-08-2016, 04:29 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Vicianus - 12-17-2016, 07:20 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 12-22-2016, 08:36 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Artloader - 12-22-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Pattison - 12-23-2016, 10:51 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 12-31-2016, 10:24 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 12-31-2016, 10:39 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by devares - 12-31-2016, 08:45 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by AngeliquevdMee - 01-22-2017, 07:07 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-08-2017, 04:44 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Triggerpigking - 03-08-2017, 07:30 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-09-2017, 10:30 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by devares - 03-10-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-11-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by tfantoni - 03-12-2017, 02:34 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-12-2017, 04:59 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 03-12-2017, 07:12 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by SerGeorgious - 03-12-2017, 03:50 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Jonesoda - 03-12-2017, 05:47 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-13-2017, 02:51 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Pinshivic - 03-14-2017, 08:56 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-15-2017, 03:00 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Joe - 03-15-2017, 06:59 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 03-16-2017, 05:46 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by kvSketch - 03-16-2017, 06:12 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by AlexShi - 03-16-2017, 02:50 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-20-2017, 01:36 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-22-2017, 10:36 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by NoodleInBox - 03-22-2017, 04:28 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-27-2017, 08:14 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 03-28-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Triggerpigking - 03-28-2017, 02:15 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 03-28-2017, 09:14 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by alexdanila - 03-28-2017, 11:50 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 04-03-2017, 03:46 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Fedodika - 04-03-2017, 05:25 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by VoodooMama - 04-12-2017, 12:25 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by allenthelost - 04-13-2017, 02:56 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 04-21-2017, 07:57 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by Artloader - 04-22-2017, 12:27 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Hozure - 06-22-2017, 08:24 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by neopatogen - 06-22-2017, 11:41 PM
RE: Them sketchies - by AfricanVoodoo - 06-23-2017, 01:07 AM
RE: Them sketchies - by Triggerpigking - 06-25-2017, 08:36 PM

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