10-18-2016, 04:55 PM
oh...I like where this is going. Push dat shit. Teensy crit on the comp. It's a little centred and static, you could try playing with POV a little, like looking up at the main character a bit, with a more diagonal swoop or S curve of the creature thing in front of and behind him. Just a thought. the comp as is works ok, but it might not hurt to play a bit with it.