10-20-2016, 10:37 AM
Nice update on the piece. Looking good. Definitely needs some lost edge work, especially with the distant figures. The level of detail is probably good for them, but they are pretty hard edged. Similar for around the painting in general.
I think you need to push separation of the fabric on the centaur, it blends and flattens a lot with everything else, needs some cast shadows I guess. I also am drawn quite a bit to the rear of the centaur, maybe because again it is a pretty sharp silhouette and very simplified in form compared to front legs.
Might want to consider showing even more motion, again with some well chosen edgework. Nice stuff man!
I think you need to push separation of the fabric on the centaur, it blends and flattens a lot with everything else, needs some cast shadows I guess. I also am drawn quite a bit to the rear of the centaur, maybe because again it is a pretty sharp silhouette and very simplified in form compared to front legs.
Might want to consider showing even more motion, again with some well chosen edgework. Nice stuff man!