11-13-2016, 09:14 PM
Sorry for bothering you again, John, but I have to tell you again that your values are off. Color is not important, color is kinda like a cherry atop of a cake. Values are more important imo. The girl on a background has the same values as other two girls, walls have the same values. And i cannot understand which of these girls on a foreground - the drummer or the guitar player. You have to add aerial perspective (i believe it's called aerial in eng), you have to add plans, accents. I know it could be annoying that i keep talking about values, but the values is the basis, foundation of your work. Plus i think that it is too tight for them to be in this format.