11-22-2016, 06:11 PM
Maybe this is just me but it looks like her kneepads are fastened to her thigh above her knee instead of where her kneecap should be. The folds of her pants seem to suggest that her actual kneecap is roughly a kneepad width lower. Just measuring with my fingers, the measurement from bottom of her boot to center of kneepad, when moved up the figure, means the same measurement goes from the center of kneepad to her lower ribcage, instead of ending at the pelvis. I think perhaps you meant for her ankle to be where the tops of her boots start, but added on the tall boots (nice detail on those) without considering how that changes the proportion of her leg.
I would look at the slope of her shoulders, too. Maybe square those up a bit - figure out where the points of the shoulders are. The shoulder on viewer's left seems longer/wider than the one on viewer's right.
I like the practicality of her uniform in both color and fit. She feels authentic. The touches of yellow on her boots, kneepads and harness add some nice interest and seem to signal that she is from some kind of organized force. Might be cool if that were part of her unit's colors and she had a yellow patch or something on the uniform. I'm curious what her helmet looks like.
I would look at the slope of her shoulders, too. Maybe square those up a bit - figure out where the points of the shoulders are. The shoulder on viewer's left seems longer/wider than the one on viewer's right.
I like the practicality of her uniform in both color and fit. She feels authentic. The touches of yellow on her boots, kneepads and harness add some nice interest and seem to signal that she is from some kind of organized force. Might be cool if that were part of her unit's colors and she had a yellow patch or something on the uniform. I'm curious what her helmet looks like.