Eric's Clever Sketchbook Title

[John]

 I feel like it's missing something, but I'm not sure what... some sort of x-factor is eluding me.

Feel free to disregard this, as you might be figuring out this by yourself.

If I can help you out on the x-factor you're trying to look for.. maybe it's a good idea to re-evaluate the lighting setup for this piece. It feels as if there are too many light sources or the light source isn't as consistent. I made a quick paint-over. Arrows indicate the direction where light is headed. Each color is represents a different light source.


Oh btw, the forages are pretty! I like the colors!