02-19-2017, 11:46 PM
Hey hey!
Nice work!
Some Constructive Critique: The first things that come to mind are simply to work on it a bit more: using a slightly darker or lighter brush, to sculpt in some of the rock shapes in the cavern walls, also perhaps on the ground.
The edges of the figure's nose could be sharpened a little I think, if the figure is also made of rock then it would look nice to sculpt in a little of those rocky lines into him.
The last critique is compositional, to do with tangents: it seems like you've got the cave wall wrapping around the "2d" silhouette of the figure... it magically wraps around him in a way that only works for the imaginary camera looking at the scene from this angle. So maybe if you had that background wall go behind him instead of wrapping around the perimeter, it would look a bit more natural, and you'd have some depth happening due to the overlapping shapes.
I hope that makes sense. Keep it up!
Nice work!
Some Constructive Critique: The first things that come to mind are simply to work on it a bit more: using a slightly darker or lighter brush, to sculpt in some of the rock shapes in the cavern walls, also perhaps on the ground.
The edges of the figure's nose could be sharpened a little I think, if the figure is also made of rock then it would look nice to sculpt in a little of those rocky lines into him.
The last critique is compositional, to do with tangents: it seems like you've got the cave wall wrapping around the "2d" silhouette of the figure... it magically wraps around him in a way that only works for the imaginary camera looking at the scene from this angle. So maybe if you had that background wall go behind him instead of wrapping around the perimeter, it would look a bit more natural, and you'd have some depth happening due to the overlapping shapes.
I hope that makes sense. Keep it up!
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