Kimonas's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

Hmm, this is just what i think at first glance; I think the like spikes on him are too neat, like on his back they kinda look like a toy, maybe make them a little more jagged or roughed up. The white horns in the back of his head look kinda cartooney, and like they weigh his head down a lot, that and they don't really add to the silhouette, considering where they're placed. I'd either change their design, or make them smaller or just drop them completely.

Also, the scene seems like it's hard to tell the narrative; the dragon seems very friendly, judging by his expression, that and his head is quite big compared to his body making him look kind of cute. The pose of the figure however, seems like it's intimidated or stunned or preparing to fight this very docile creature. I'd also reccomend cutting down some of the end of his tail to vary the kind of big small dynamic you could have there, the size is too constant and unchanging. The back leg kind of bugs me, I'm not sure how to fix it, it just seems weird how it connects to the body.

I like all these overlaps on the rocks however, good you're challenging yourself!