03-10-2017, 10:51 AM
I think the pose you drew is inherently stiff, it would even be in a photo of someone in that stance. I made you a few notes here, I see you are trying to do something dynamic here, but I'm gonna provide you a few examples so you know what I'm talking about
low shot
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-539346385
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-542484948
At height
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Observation-534626678
http://maciejkuciara.deviantart.com/art/...-526007078
Avove
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Heliosphere-544711552
http://madspartan013.deviantart.com/art/...-543969234
TILT
http://6kart.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-Hunter-514106067
http://rossdraws.deviantart.com/art/Red-538442797
Doesn't mean these will always be the best fit for any situation, BUT! to show a dynamic scene like yours, there's gotta be a lot more dynamics in the camera, as well as the pose. Also avoid big squares in the composition, i mean doing only flat square shapes. Let me know if anything I'm saying doesn't make sense, I'm having trouble putting it into words..
low shot
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-539346385
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-542484948
At height
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Observation-534626678
http://maciejkuciara.deviantart.com/art/...-526007078
Avove
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Heliosphere-544711552
http://madspartan013.deviantart.com/art/...-543969234
TILT
http://6kart.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-Hunter-514106067
http://rossdraws.deviantart.com/art/Red-538442797
Doesn't mean these will always be the best fit for any situation, BUT! to show a dynamic scene like yours, there's gotta be a lot more dynamics in the camera, as well as the pose. Also avoid big squares in the composition, i mean doing only flat square shapes. Let me know if anything I'm saying doesn't make sense, I'm having trouble putting it into words..
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]