Pinshivic's Daily Streambook
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hmm, I think you could try some softer edges on those eyes, they look like a doll's face, quite plastic. I like the depth of field you have around the hair and +1 for the grain filter ;). The structure seems good, you just need to delve more into details and edges, and that may be tough since you draw mostly, so i'd reccomend trying some texture brushes instead of just the basic ones you seem to be using and try adding and removing texture and noise manually.

Like the lips, I doubt they look like that, maybe have some creases and folds in them or moisture. The skin looks plastic because the lack of texture and hue variation. try spending more time on stuff, or try texturing something simple like a ball of granite or something, see how far you can push the realism of texture alone with just a ball, it's an exercise a lotta ppl do

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Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-14-2017, 08:00 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by John - 03-15-2017, 02:07 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-15-2017, 03:25 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-15-2017, 05:15 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Artloader - 03-15-2017, 08:58 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-15-2017, 09:20 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Fedodika - 03-16-2017, 06:04 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-16-2017, 07:33 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Fedodika - 03-16-2017, 07:44 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-16-2017, 07:50 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-17-2017, 07:02 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Fedodika - 03-17-2017, 07:08 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-17-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-17-2017, 07:54 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-18-2017, 07:01 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Fedodika - 03-18-2017, 08:13 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-18-2017, 08:23 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Fedodika - 03-18-2017, 08:35 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-18-2017, 08:58 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-19-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Pinshivic - 03-20-2017, 05:14 AM
RE: Pinshivic's Daily Streambook - by Abnormal - 03-23-2017, 02:20 AM

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