Tea illustration
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Just a general comment on the table and chairs in the first image. If you are going for a wooden table, those legs on both are incredibly thin and make me focus on them in a negative way. i would also suggest to use an elliptical selection to get the tabletops neatly edged if your style is clean lines, otherwise it looks a bit sloppy.

If you aren't drawing with or know how to construct perspective grids and then place basic objects in that perspective , you're gonna get that feedback a lot in the future, so start filling in gaps in your knowledge. True especially if you want to do comics in general, you need to nail this aspect down. The last image is much more solid perspective wise though there are many small issues.

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Tea illustration - by ZombieChinchilla - 04-10-2017, 07:49 AM
RE: Tea illustration - by cesartalves - 04-11-2017, 02:25 AM
RE: Tea illustration - by sketchophil - 04-11-2017, 04:19 AM
RE: Tea illustration - by ZombieChinchilla - 04-11-2017, 01:49 PM
RE: Tea illustration - by meat - 04-12-2017, 12:35 PM
RE: Tea illustration - by ZombieChinchilla - 04-12-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: Tea illustration - by meat - 04-13-2017, 05:16 AM
RE: Tea illustration - by ZombieChinchilla - 04-17-2017, 11:20 AM
RE: Tea illustration - by Amit Dutta - 04-17-2017, 11:41 AM

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