04-18-2017, 09:04 PM
Hey, good to see those dynamic sketching excercices!Rewired my brain. I never took Han's class, only Drawabox, and the 1st 2 lessons (the fundamentals) were a lot like what you're doing.
Your lines seem a bit sloppy to me, not sure if you really focused on each mark and line or just did them too quickly. Uncomfortable wrote that each shape must be a result of your best effort, including hatching if you choose to do it, and I remember it gave me hard times to really focus on those excercises. I didn't post my stuff here tho, only links to reddit.
Also, you don't seem to pay attention to line weight with your boxes, Uncomfortable explained it pretty well in the Fundamentals section. It seemed not important to me first, but it really helps the forms and overlapping shapes read if there's no shading.
I stopped halfway through insects thinking that I need to do some more imaginative stuff, but now am into this stuff again, the 250 box challenge.
Love Proko's lessons as well, doing the anatomy class atm, I find those lessons most understandable of whatever a self-taught person might find in the Internet on the subject. Good luck with those!
Your lines seem a bit sloppy to me, not sure if you really focused on each mark and line or just did them too quickly. Uncomfortable wrote that each shape must be a result of your best effort, including hatching if you choose to do it, and I remember it gave me hard times to really focus on those excercises. I didn't post my stuff here tho, only links to reddit.
Also, you don't seem to pay attention to line weight with your boxes, Uncomfortable explained it pretty well in the Fundamentals section. It seemed not important to me first, but it really helps the forms and overlapping shapes read if there's no shading.
I stopped halfway through insects thinking that I need to do some more imaginative stuff, but now am into this stuff again, the 250 box challenge.
Love Proko's lessons as well, doing the anatomy class atm, I find those lessons most understandable of whatever a self-taught person might find in the Internet on the subject. Good luck with those!