05-02-2017, 12:07 AM
Next panel of Alice. Not sure about purgatory. Maybe pathways. I'd simply call it Alice if I could. ?
Dialogue is a bit messy and haven't cleaned it up yet, so:
1:"Madame Caterpillar, stop eating the mushrooms, and tell me where Alice is!"
2:"Just wait, Hatter."
3: "And look who's talking, tiny!"
4:"Quiet, Dormouse."
I might take out the last line, since it seems kinda redundant and lame, but I dunno.
Dialogue is a bit messy and haven't cleaned it up yet, so:
1:"Madame Caterpillar, stop eating the mushrooms, and tell me where Alice is!"
2:"Just wait, Hatter."
3: "And look who's talking, tiny!"
4:"Quiet, Dormouse."
I might take out the last line, since it seems kinda redundant and lame, but I dunno.