05-29-2017, 11:02 PM
(05-29-2017, 09:05 PM)chubbycat Wrote: Hey, Daniel. Welcome to CD :D
Nice sketchbook you have so far, especially for someone who hasn't been drawing seriously for very long.
Since you asked for some crit, I thought I'd briefly pop by and touch on some anatomy issues in your first image. The main issues are with her legs, their angles and how they connect to the pelvis. Her left leg (the one going under the other) doesn't line up with her hip and makes her look a bit broken. Try the pose yourself and you'll also feel how awkward it is to hold.
A nitpicky thing, but be careful with how small you make her ankles too.. they are very tiny, especially in relation to her wrists.
I hope that was somewhat helpful to you.
Keep up the good work.. I can't wait to see more! :)
Aw, really! Thanks for critique! I'll try to work with leg in this artwork (If i will render/coloring it).
Well, i always making anatomy sketch before designing and clear line. And on anatomy sketch leg was not bad as in final line. But now i see this mistakes. Thanks again :).