05-31-2017, 11:40 PM
hey steeliebob, well I don't have really much to say about your stuff as far as critiques. You have an appealing style, kind of reminds me of Sinixdesign and Ashley wood. I like how you color coordinate your hatching and wrapping with different colors, it's interesting and unique...
As far as what you could do better, it's hard to say because you do a lot of things well, in all fields, gesture, story, shape, perspective, design...
But I'll say this and maybe it'll make sense. The sketches on the top right in this one, particularly the girl are on the money, something about that one is just way more appealing and finished looking than everything else. But the more I look at it, it kinda comes apart, like the hands are strange and really big and the lines aren't really coherent in that particular area.
http://i.imgur.com/H5r0GaW.jpg
Also sometimes your thin lines get scratchy/lumpy and messy and it lessens the quality of the drawing. But I'm sure you're aware of these things, seeing how cohesive and unique your style is. I think just being aware of those things will help you and doing what you're already doing will work those kinks out. Your stuff is VERY close to being fantastic, so just hurry along and you'll get there soon
As far as what you could do better, it's hard to say because you do a lot of things well, in all fields, gesture, story, shape, perspective, design...
But I'll say this and maybe it'll make sense. The sketches on the top right in this one, particularly the girl are on the money, something about that one is just way more appealing and finished looking than everything else. But the more I look at it, it kinda comes apart, like the hands are strange and really big and the lines aren't really coherent in that particular area.
http://i.imgur.com/H5r0GaW.jpg
Also sometimes your thin lines get scratchy/lumpy and messy and it lessens the quality of the drawing. But I'm sure you're aware of these things, seeing how cohesive and unique your style is. I think just being aware of those things will help you and doing what you're already doing will work those kinks out. Your stuff is VERY close to being fantastic, so just hurry along and you'll get there soon
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]