06-05-2017, 06:36 AM
@Steeliebob
Hey man. Thanks for dropping by my SB.
Your style is awesome and I definitely get what you're going for, but I feel like in some instances you push the exaggeration a bit too much/a bit in the wrong direction, and it ends up impacting your style negatively. Most prominently I think it's the example on the bowed calves and small knees, I feel like with a bit of tweaking it could be so so much more appealing. But again, since it's your gig and all, take this with a grain of salt, I'm sure you'll figure something out that works for you.
I would also love to see you spend some time on a bigger/a bit more refined traditional piece, maybe exagarrate elements enough to create a sort of composition within the figure itself; your style is extremely lenient to accomplish that.
I can't comment much on perspective since I'm still learning that as well, but I like the castle sketch.
In your landscape study (or at least what I assume to be a study) the colors look a bit washed out. But again, I can't comment much since I too am learning that aspect.
Love your stuff regardless dude, keep on posting!
Hey man. Thanks for dropping by my SB.
Your style is awesome and I definitely get what you're going for, but I feel like in some instances you push the exaggeration a bit too much/a bit in the wrong direction, and it ends up impacting your style negatively. Most prominently I think it's the example on the bowed calves and small knees, I feel like with a bit of tweaking it could be so so much more appealing. But again, since it's your gig and all, take this with a grain of salt, I'm sure you'll figure something out that works for you.
I would also love to see you spend some time on a bigger/a bit more refined traditional piece, maybe exagarrate elements enough to create a sort of composition within the figure itself; your style is extremely lenient to accomplish that.
I can't comment much on perspective since I'm still learning that as well, but I like the castle sketch.
In your landscape study (or at least what I assume to be a study) the colors look a bit washed out. But again, I can't comment much since I too am learning that aspect.
Love your stuff regardless dude, keep on posting!