08-17-2017, 12:01 PM
Hey Daniel,
Dude, I love your characters especially in that last illustration. I think that it has a good start, but you could do more to separate that center guy. He has a nice pop of that red color, but value wise I think you could push it further. Your lighting is kinda all over the place. That center guy seems like he could be emitting light, but it's not clear. Something dramatic that would add to this eerie gloomy mysterious vibe. I like how the figures are this faceless wall, and that the hands are all doing something different as well.
Dude, I love your characters especially in that last illustration. I think that it has a good start, but you could do more to separate that center guy. He has a nice pop of that red color, but value wise I think you could push it further. Your lighting is kinda all over the place. That center guy seems like he could be emitting light, but it's not clear. Something dramatic that would add to this eerie gloomy mysterious vibe. I like how the figures are this faceless wall, and that the hands are all doing something different as well.