09-08-2017, 07:32 AM
Heya, for me the weakest links are your figurative studies. Hiding, Alone, Luna. They showcase issues and shortfalls in your anatomical understanding, even though they are, i assume, essentially studies?
Also the Von Sydow and Psycho pieces, just general execution.
The friend portraits, authors, and the first two pieces are better. The film studies are ok, but they are just studies aren't they? The knight piece is interesting, but the structure and pose of the little knight has many issues.
In general, you can probably work more more on your form and structural drawing, and do more that isn't just study as you add more pieces. You could work with more defined lighting schemes and sharper more 'designed' shadow shapes which is showing up in the lovecraft piece. Edge control in particular also could do with some work on picking the right edges to fade and the ones to retain sharpess. go a bit bolder with both. Why are you printing at this stage, is it for a specific reason?
Also the Von Sydow and Psycho pieces, just general execution.
The friend portraits, authors, and the first two pieces are better. The film studies are ok, but they are just studies aren't they? The knight piece is interesting, but the structure and pose of the little knight has many issues.
In general, you can probably work more more on your form and structural drawing, and do more that isn't just study as you add more pieces. You could work with more defined lighting schemes and sharper more 'designed' shadow shapes which is showing up in the lovecraft piece. Edge control in particular also could do with some work on picking the right edges to fade and the ones to retain sharpess. go a bit bolder with both. Why are you printing at this stage, is it for a specific reason?