ANDREW GIBBONS SKETCHBOOK

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Hey bro, I love all those pen studies for the figures!!

As most ppl know I really like neked ladiez, so i am definitely enjoying the most recent piece hehe; It has a very nice gestural flow from the left to the right and alotta good overlaps :). I would try maybe playing with the cropping a little, for instance you could crop the right side of the picture just a little to make the focal point not dead center. As far as the rendering and values, I think you'll sort out a lot of things I'm seeing given some time, Nice stuff!

Thanks for the feedback. i definitely share an appreciation for neked ladiez haha

I was thinking the same about the cropping. the centeredness is a bit odd and it really stuck out when i opened the piece with fresh eyes.
hope i can really sort out the rendering but i'm glad no ones had any major issues with the composition that i've been blind to.

heres a little process thing for a piece i didnt finish
should be clickable for larger view