ANDREW GIBBONS SKETCHBOOK

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Hey! Re:naked ladies, I also think the centred comp could be improved by shifting to off-centre. For my taste I'd remove one of the naked ladies on the left side to allow for more negative space, but I could be wrong on that. I loooove the central girl & dragon, they're looking swell.

The boobs are looking quite high up on your figures. The girly on the top left has a kind of anti-grav invisible push-up bra effect that's consequently making her torso look strangely long.

Great work though. Love your dedication to pose studies!

Thanks for the feedback, i noticed the oddness of the centredness. totally agree and will fix that. im hoping when i render the water it will increase the negative space feel on the left.
i dressed up in girls uniform on last day of highschool and got told off for my boobs being too high..
tendencies we develop hey :P will fix all that in the many hours of rendering to come..


cheers for taking a look at me sketch book