10-05-2017, 09:28 AM
Hey thanks bro,
yeah I didn't pay enough attention to the anatomy, i did fudge the neck and i had a ref where the ear was showing but since i didn't follow the shape exactly it didn't come across the same.
I agree bout the clavicle too and i should have given her some shoulder tone for sure haha
It was a bit of a rush job but ill probably open it up again later and refine it and try make it bullet proof ;)
cheers for the crit
here's a bit o progress with this one
tweaked some composition
![[Image: onsen_dragon_wide9_by_andrew_gibbons-dbpimhb.jpg]](https://orig00.deviantart.net/866c/f/2017/277/e/e/onsen_dragon_wide9_by_andrew_gibbons-dbpimhb.jpg)
yeah I didn't pay enough attention to the anatomy, i did fudge the neck and i had a ref where the ear was showing but since i didn't follow the shape exactly it didn't come across the same.
I agree bout the clavicle too and i should have given her some shoulder tone for sure haha
It was a bit of a rush job but ill probably open it up again later and refine it and try make it bullet proof ;)
cheers for the crit
here's a bit o progress with this one
tweaked some composition