10-08-2017, 12:53 AM
Hi.
It seems the lighting is everywhere. It's hard to tell where the sources are or how many are there in that particular piece.
Suggestions:
1. If you think the light setup is too overwhelming, scale the amount back to just one primary light source. If you haven't come across this, there's a head lighting reference in Art of Wei's youtube (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kA7mFUWlZjU) I refer to that when I do paintings so the light will be more or less consistent.
2. Here's a guide to planes of the head
![[Image: Plane+Head.jpg]](https://2.bp.blogspot.com/-qdvPUhloy-g/U7f3bh5_d5I/AAAAAAAAXMg/UBG6BiP-KAI/s1600/Plane+Head.jpg)
Try googling, 'Asaro head'!
3. If that's complicated, scale back again and try to render a sphere! Check this one out: http://www.dorian-iten.com/shading-mistakes/
(Better yet, check everything Dorian Iten has to offer!)
Hey man, good luck! Sweet monster designs!
It seems the lighting is everywhere. It's hard to tell where the sources are or how many are there in that particular piece.
Suggestions:
1. If you think the light setup is too overwhelming, scale the amount back to just one primary light source. If you haven't come across this, there's a head lighting reference in Art of Wei's youtube (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kA7mFUWlZjU) I refer to that when I do paintings so the light will be more or less consistent.
2. Here's a guide to planes of the head
Try googling, 'Asaro head'!
3. If that's complicated, scale back again and try to render a sphere! Check this one out: http://www.dorian-iten.com/shading-mistakes/
(Better yet, check everything Dorian Iten has to offer!)
Hey man, good luck! Sweet monster designs!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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