10-25-2017, 11:51 AM
So im noticing this mistake you're making, it may have to do with how you're treating the form of the nose. You're still kinda doing the symbol drawing thing with it; like you have to remember a nose protrudes from the face and you're kind of it in that phase where (i still go through it) where you feel like you have to show all the features, and only at extreme angles are they not visible.
When i tilt my head at that direction, i see my nose moving in space, because in your portait here, your nose is literally on the same plane as your cheeks. If you keep postin I'll keep critting you i mean it could be a cool experiment to see how fast one could improve with lots of crits haha. Let me know if you want me to stop, but i see a lot of potential in you and i wanna see where you can get with your work ethic with some of the stops pulled out
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...natomy.jpg
Really cool youre doing the asaro heads, it's quickly making a difference. Try doing some from memory, that'll be much more challenging, then check back and you'll see the blindspots!
When i tilt my head at that direction, i see my nose moving in space, because in your portait here, your nose is literally on the same plane as your cheeks. If you keep postin I'll keep critting you i mean it could be a cool experiment to see how fast one could improve with lots of crits haha. Let me know if you want me to stop, but i see a lot of potential in you and i wanna see where you can get with your work ethic with some of the stops pulled out
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...natomy.jpg
Really cool youre doing the asaro heads, it's quickly making a difference. Try doing some from memory, that'll be much more challenging, then check back and you'll see the blindspots!
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]