Ubem's Deliberate Practice
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hey bro, child of IC right?? BOXES LOOMIS BRO

I love the design of your angel dude, nice pallete and the value composition aint bad. I think the biggest issue is you picked an ultra safe pose and a really flat angle to show the body. I personally dont think it'll work if you keep going with this pose, its too flat and scissored. The face is cool your rendering is really tasty, its just so flat bro. I mean its an evil angel flying from the heavens; like... if you were to play that roll, take that pose yourself. How cool does it feel? Like exactly how he's positioned. 

Something with some drama is always more worth it... What does this pose say about the character? He can spread his legs and hold a sword with a near emotionless face? Look for angles and curves in a gesture, it can be subtle. 

https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1514568201

curve the spine, turn the torso in space, SHOW DEPTH!! 

makes all that painting worth it ;)

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 07-27-2017, 02:56 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by chrisbojan - 07-27-2017, 05:00 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by NoodleInBox - 07-29-2017, 05:24 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 08-03-2017, 03:21 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by Artloader - 08-03-2017, 11:26 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 08-30-2017, 03:20 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by Tygerson - 08-31-2017, 02:51 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by kikindaface - 08-31-2017, 04:36 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by AfricanVoodoo - 09-03-2017, 12:45 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 09-29-2017, 04:18 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 09-30-2017, 10:34 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by NoodleInBox - 10-01-2017, 08:59 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 10-01-2017, 01:29 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by xelfereht - 10-01-2017, 04:06 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 10-02-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by xelfereht - 10-02-2017, 02:02 PM
RE: Beginner Hoping to Improve - by ubem - 10-03-2017, 09:23 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 10-15-2017, 05:59 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 12-31-2017, 01:12 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 01-02-2018, 10:29 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 01-02-2018, 01:50 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 03-11-2018, 12:08 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 03-11-2018, 01:35 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Tygerson - 03-13-2018, 04:48 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 04-23-2018, 12:55 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 04-23-2018, 01:49 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 07-06-2018, 12:11 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 07-06-2018, 09:37 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by badbadcat - 09-09-2018, 09:55 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by darktiste - 09-10-2018, 07:11 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 03-28-2019, 02:22 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 03-28-2019, 04:02 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by darktiste - 04-08-2019, 04:04 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by roanna - 04-13-2019, 09:39 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Baldgate - 04-23-2019, 01:33 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-17-2019, 10:13 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 08-17-2019, 11:55 AM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-17-2019, 07:09 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 08-17-2019, 09:53 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-03-2020, 05:26 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-03-2020, 05:42 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-03-2020, 05:51 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by xelfereht - 08-03-2020, 06:03 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by ubem - 08-03-2020, 06:54 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by xelfereht - 08-03-2020, 08:20 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by Fedodika - 08-03-2020, 11:08 PM
RE: Ubem's Deliberate Practice - by JosephCow - 08-04-2020, 02:14 AM

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