01-11-2018, 01:46 AM
Hey Vick! I like that you're doing this proko stuff and it seems to be putting itself together well. big thing i notice in here is an inconsistency with the individual parts you lay down, particularly the heads. Id reccomend getting a sheet and just doing heads from one angle side by side and noticing and fixing your issues as you go along; also checking a diagram of heads to note changes and proportions.
Also your gestures are quite stiff, but you are headed in the right direction for sure. Just try and get a swooshing motion and try to maintain that swoosh as much as you can
Here watch these
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07fusT-dwVE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OWLT0_i5Co
"be water my friend"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJMwBwFj5nQ
Also your gestures are quite stiff, but you are headed in the right direction for sure. Just try and get a swooshing motion and try to maintain that swoosh as much as you can
Here watch these
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07fusT-dwVE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OWLT0_i5Co
"be water my friend"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJMwBwFj5nQ
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]