07-16-2018, 01:58 PM
Nice start to the sketch man. I have to agree with Fedodika's crit. I would also suggest studying fishtails alongside how various artists design/paint mermaids.
At the moment, her tail seems really disjointed to her body because of the way some of the lines are. The 'knees' are pointing away from us, and the line showing separation between her 'thighs' and 'calves' only add to this. The amount of bum we see is also not quite right for the angle her torso is in.
I've attached a pic to try and show you the places I mean.
![[Image: 0f018c6a6c9ca553ce394473180b4a20.jpg]](https://i.pinimg.com/564x/0f/01/8c/0f018c6a6c9ca553ce394473180b4a20.jpg)
Hope it helps. Keep up the good work :)
At the moment, her tail seems really disjointed to her body because of the way some of the lines are. The 'knees' are pointing away from us, and the line showing separation between her 'thighs' and 'calves' only add to this. The amount of bum we see is also not quite right for the angle her torso is in.
I've attached a pic to try and show you the places I mean.
Hope it helps. Keep up the good work :)