08-23-2018, 09:23 PM
Hey RickRichards,
Those studies looks great and the portfolio piece is coming along well, the edges on the dog is really sweet!
It works as is, but an suggestion; you could expand the image to the left to amplify the storytelling (footsteps behind him showing that they have walked a long way, and then walking out of the picture creating suspense of where they are heading).
Another note - There should be some seperation or overlapping between his cape and the tree so that they are not in one line with each other.
Keep it up! :)
Those studies looks great and the portfolio piece is coming along well, the edges on the dog is really sweet!
It works as is, but an suggestion; you could expand the image to the left to amplify the storytelling (footsteps behind him showing that they have walked a long way, and then walking out of the picture creating suspense of where they are heading).
Another note - There should be some seperation or overlapping between his cape and the tree so that they are not in one line with each other.
Keep it up! :)