09-03-2018, 09:15 PM
Cool mage exploration designs, Narog. They look very unique from one and other and so far read well. It will be cool to see them pushed further :)
The anatomy has issues, however. Compared to the rest of the body, the legs are tiny and short, same with the feet. In turn this makes the arms look much longer than they should.
A nit-picky thing as well - even though this is just a sketchbook to fill how you want - it would be good to see a more refined presentation of your work. You have a lot of good pieces, but most of them suffer from the clutter of sketches around them or being on a canvas that feels claustrophobic and too small. The first guy in the mage concepts isn't even coloured all the way. Again, it's just a small thing, but always thinking about presentation helps in the long run.
Regardless, keep up the good work n____n
The anatomy has issues, however. Compared to the rest of the body, the legs are tiny and short, same with the feet. In turn this makes the arms look much longer than they should.
A nit-picky thing as well - even though this is just a sketchbook to fill how you want - it would be good to see a more refined presentation of your work. You have a lot of good pieces, but most of them suffer from the clutter of sketches around them or being on a canvas that feels claustrophobic and too small. The first guy in the mage concepts isn't even coloured all the way. Again, it's just a small thing, but always thinking about presentation helps in the long run.
Regardless, keep up the good work n____n