10-21-2018, 12:25 AM
I think your drawing is good, especially the head! A thing throwing me a bit off is the clothes, can't tell really why but it doesn't feel as cloth to me, maybe the texture as fedodika pointed out. I think the plane of light could be more decided on it, it might sway a bit too much . From afar your painting look really good, the head pops well ! I like that you made the eyes darker than everything else, its instantly put my focus on them.