01-03-2019, 08:02 AM
(01-03-2019, 07:40 AM)slash razor Wrote: I think all your rocks on your main pathway all look the same try to vary the sizes large medium small atm they mostly all small which throws the viewer off also its not showing depth and scale, the closest cliffs on the other side maybe make the path wider you could maybe add a character to that path with a torch? Birds flying to fill in blank spaces?
Showing depth is a biggie to me I could do a quick paintover to show you what I mean... If you want? Let me know
Otherwise great job great idea love the colours... Sounds like a cool course your doing....
I'd love a paintover, please do :))
Yeah, I agree with the lack of shape variety, but I don't really want to make the path any bigger because I'm also trying to communicate a hidden/precarious kind of path. I like the idea of adding a character--it'd help show scale too, but since I plan on putting the flower on the cliff, the flower's gonna look huge compared to the human. Also, what do you think of the left side of the composition? I don't like the shapes of the rocks but I'm having trouble finding a good dynamic rock shape.