Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

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Just refine those in 3 tone for the second sketch of post 46.You did good on the first one.But try to put atleat 3 tone instead of one or 2 solid value to describe an object or else you flaten the drawing.For the mech iteration i recommend throwing value in the background to help the shape stick out of the page because of the white background it willl register it as a if it was drawn on a paper making it automatic read as 3d but also 2d.I also added a cast shadow to anchor the shape down as being inside a 3d space.

hey thanks darktiste.... was manly trying to keep everything as simple as posible but I hear what your saying and will take that on board

the one I took further was mainly to see what would happen to one of the thumbs if I threw a few values on, I didnt really spend much time on it and wasnt thinking of it as a whole but just as a quick sketch the little guy and the monitor was just a after thought to give it scale.... but I definitely see your point I think what you have done just adding background and darkening the bot has made it more metal like almost like 1930s industrial Germany steelworks look which I like so will try to imitate that style next time.... cheers bud