Ubem's Deliberate Practice

[Fedodika]

im proud you got some work my dude, ill still lay the crits on same as usual;

see this piece would be really nice if the anatomy was designed to be attractive

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/4...chment.png

I grabbed this random pic off google
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/87/5c/48/875c4...3a81ce.jpg

If her face went from what you drew, which is an average, like certainly not impossible face, to that, the piece would be much more appealing

or like that
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/15/3c/21/153c2...it.jpg?b=t

Just your standard hot girl profile will get you a long way

or this
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/4...chment.png
What if she had this face
https://content.latest-hairstyles.com/wp...aircut.jpg


or this girl
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/4...adin2k.jpg

Pose is super stiff, the hands youre drawing are not very appealing, just kinda dumpy no fingernails, almost like you are trying to do them just because itd look weird without them. Hands are really beautiful expressive things, use photos if you have to, get some killer hands, its worth it! Her face is just, you know its like those weird elder scrolls 4 faces that dont have the animation rigged right, its not attractive, and i know beauty is in the eye of the beholder, but if youre drawing a young attractive female you gotta make her just that.

The tards on the interwebs dont want to see plain jains or your best imagination face they want attractive features, both men and women like that.

I know you dont want to hear it but you really need to stop painting and learn anatomy and draw more, you still have the exact same problems as when i gave you the same writeup even a year ago, you havent even started addressing the issues, its just more painting more not caring about stiff poses and bad anatomy.

Im happy you got the jobs man but if you want to get better faster youll need to work on the bare bones fundamentals and do beautiful drawings, with pencil on paper with construction, lets see it ;)