04-10-2019, 01:15 PM
Looking good Fed. I like the vibes of the image so far. I did a lil quick paintover to hopefully show a couple of issues that immediately stand out.
Something that stands out is that the left arm/hand is completely different colour to the chest and face. With the chest, the way it's shaded makes her look like she only has one titty. The top doesn't show any volume in the shadows or light. I probably went too far with the paintover, but hopefully it helps. I also changed the direction of her stomach, because rn it's looking like her stomach is going away from us, but her chest is coming forward, so it ends up looking a touch awkward.
With her face I made her eye closer to the nose and the lips a bit smaller, but that's probably personal preference more than anything.
Anyway. Hope it's helpful.
Something that stands out is that the left arm/hand is completely different colour to the chest and face. With the chest, the way it's shaded makes her look like she only has one titty. The top doesn't show any volume in the shadows or light. I probably went too far with the paintover, but hopefully it helps. I also changed the direction of her stomach, because rn it's looking like her stomach is going away from us, but her chest is coming forward, so it ends up looking a touch awkward.
With her face I made her eye closer to the nose and the lips a bit smaller, but that's probably personal preference more than anything.
Anyway. Hope it's helpful.