10-18-2019, 08:02 PM
Heya! So I saw the panel change, I feel with the reorganizing is a bit kind of messy, so I tried to do an idea. I like your bubbles shapes and handwriting a lot more so disregard those. I wanted to make it flow a bit more clear, keep the view inside the interaction between them. Also suggest you can vary the lettering shape, size and all that to go along with the emotion, mood, you have. Like when she says slob! Make it bolder, bigger, because I imagine it as a scream or higher in tone, meanwhile her reply is smaller, because it's more coy, softer, she's lowering her head so that's the attitude I get from her. Obedience.
Horchata! Oh well I can maybe tell where you are from, from this. Ha! I think we share a language. Her looks remind me of Tsuomu nihei, Cibo, from Blame! I'm a big fan of that manga. Is due to the color scheme, eye type and expression mostly, I feel. Your drawings feel a lot more cheerful!
I personally like a lot more this kind of vertical strip with open places and floating close panels, dunno why but it appeals to me quite a bit. Everything flows quite well also! I like it. Your inktober idea is pretty good, like I imagine both the item and and actual dragon/lizard monster being lifted up into the sky or to sit on someones neck, it's a nice thing to see. Both the small and large scale at play, together.
Now I want to see when you are gonna hit any action your your stories! See how you fend with that. Or maybe they are slow burners? Lots of exposition? Anyhow, keep it up!
Horchata! Oh well I can maybe tell where you are from, from this. Ha! I think we share a language. Her looks remind me of Tsuomu nihei, Cibo, from Blame! I'm a big fan of that manga. Is due to the color scheme, eye type and expression mostly, I feel. Your drawings feel a lot more cheerful!
I personally like a lot more this kind of vertical strip with open places and floating close panels, dunno why but it appeals to me quite a bit. Everything flows quite well also! I like it. Your inktober idea is pretty good, like I imagine both the item and and actual dragon/lizard monster being lifted up into the sky or to sit on someones neck, it's a nice thing to see. Both the small and large scale at play, together.
Now I want to see when you are gonna hit any action your your stories! See how you fend with that. Or maybe they are slow burners? Lots of exposition? Anyhow, keep it up!