10-29-2019, 08:02 AM
Welcome!
I looked into the PDF and it seems that you posted both your versions and the suggested enhancements but without the comments, do I understand correctly? So are you looking to get additional comments on your versions? My first advice is to pay more attention to the size of the body parts relative to each other, and to not mix up the left and right hand.
I would try giving the fauness shorter thighs and longer segments after that, just like goats have, this might improve walking. Reminds me of an old side project of mine for a comic that tells the adventure of some nature creatures.
I looked into the PDF and it seems that you posted both your versions and the suggested enhancements but without the comments, do I understand correctly? So are you looking to get additional comments on your versions? My first advice is to pay more attention to the size of the body parts relative to each other, and to not mix up the left and right hand.
I would try giving the fauness shorter thighs and longer segments after that, just like goats have, this might improve walking. Reminds me of an old side project of mine for a comic that tells the adventure of some nature creatures.